Ideas

I am going to put Fisher in jail after Daisy Lynn was destroyed because she was accused of her uncle's murder. I think this will make the story more interesting. I can introduce more characters.
I am also going to introduce a Danish prince that runs away with the circus. He's the seventh son of the King, and is a very good acrobat. I am fascinated by magic and circus life. That will be a great element in my story as well.
I will change the residence of the Indian pirate to Goa since it's a beach that's beautiful beyond word's description, and I will exercise my imagination on how blue the ocean is and how pretty the sandy beach is. I will research on the subject.
I am going to introduce Melody Major in an opera house and put in some thrilling action there. You will not be able to doze off in this opera performance, the suspense will keep you on the edge of your seat.
I am looking forward to writing this novel because it's so exciting. The characters are taking better shapes in my mind now and I think I know what they look like, what their idiosyncrasies are.